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Post by ashes on Jan 13, 2013 7:02:57 GMT -10
<table width="472" height="645" border="0" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" background="http://i48.tinypic.com/35ciwrd.jpg"> <tr> <td colspan="3" width="472" height="92"></td> </tr> <tr> <td rowspan="2" width="54" height="553"></td> <td width="361" height="200" valign="top"><div style="width:100%; height:100%; overflow:auto; color:black; text-align:left; font-family:verdana; font-size:9pt;"> Burnt Ashes My hooves struck the ground lightly, as I galloped across the forest. My nostrils taking in the smells of the forest, one of my favorite things. It reminded me of home, but I couldn't go back there. Never... ever. The thought came into my head and nagged at me, not letting me forget about it. I tried hard, but it always came back to haunt me. I shook my head and tried to focus on something else. But it staid in the back of my head, nagging me all the while as I ran. I knew what would happen if I went back to my familys herd. I would be taken as soon as I arrived by the lead stallion. He had a thing for me, and was determined to have me. Yet I refused and the made him angry, no furious. So I left, that very night. He sent many search parties after me, and I always managed to evade getting found. My pace faltered as I noticed the terrain had gotten rockier. The annoying and disturbing thoughts quickly left my head when I got a good look at my surroundings. It was darker and creepier than where I had just been. It was kind of creeping me out. I slowed down to a walk, letting the dark gloom settle around me. My earlier break neck gallop didn't seem right in here. My body seemed to have a mind of its own, while my mind was screaming to get out of there and run as fast away from here as I could. But my body kept going, feeling a strange attraction to this gloomy place. Word Count: 283 Muse: Ehh its ok Notes: Done </div></td> <td rowspan="2" width="57" height="553"></td> </tr> <tr> <td width="361" height="353"></td> </tr> </table><br><center> <a href="http://www.tintedglass.net/layoutgen">Code generated by Tintedglass Layout Generator</a></center>
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Post by Renea on Jan 13, 2013 21:24:39 GMT -10
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His hooves echoed in the building that had once belong to the humans who once ran this land. It was now the main place for his herd, in a old small town that had buildings for his herd to use as they pleased, but the hospital... It was his domain and his families home, once he had a family. Oh, he would have the best alliance, he would crush those pansies known as the lights one day, though he would take his time. He snorted as he looked out one of the broken windows, the clouds were gathering overhead on the fine spring day and it made him smile slightly...
Someone was coming...
The wind was carrying the scent over the land, moving it through the trees and into the hospital. It was a new scent, on that he smelt as a female and he snorted, moving away from the window and down the stairs that went to the main floor of the hospital and to the constant open door that lad outside of hospital to the town that still held paved roads. As he moved he finally saw the American Saddlebred mare that stood in a rocky area of his land. "Well, what do we have here on my land?" He asked, his deep black voice going with his black body and brown eyes. They were emotionless, barely glancing over the mare before him.
She was a painted mare, that was fine with him, but he just wanted to know why the mare was upon his land, the royal lands of the Demonic Alliance.
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Post by ashes on Jan 14, 2013 12:11:03 GMT -10
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My head snapped towards the voice, my body's posture full of confidence. I took no BS from anyone, not even a high-ranking authority. I don't care if you were my king, I deserve to be respected just like you. Me. I said, keeping no emotion in my voice. He might intimidate me a tad, but I wouldn't let that show. I was a master of emotions. I could control my emotions very well, and mask them just as easily. My orbs traveled over his muscular frame, noting that he was all black. Not even a different shade of black, a solid deep dark black. It was interesting. I have never seen anything like it before.
I heard the chirping of birds go quiet, and the tension in the air grew even more. As did the suspense of what he was going to do next. My orbs were trained on him, not moving an inch, not trusting him. I squared my body up to his as the have a fair chance if we were to fight. I was no where near his size, but that didn't mean I could win. Now did it?
Word Count: 198 Muse: Pretty good Notes: Wow sorry that was so short.
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Post by Renea on Jan 14, 2013 13:09:15 GMT -10
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The painted mare head turned towards the black beast, his mane touching his neck, the darkening skies over head setting the mood around them. Felix Hell was not going to just allow anyone on his land and he wanted to know who this mare was. ”Me.” He snorted, moving closer towards her, his brown eyes focused on this mare as she stood there, on the road that were a part of his land. ”What is your name, Mare?” His voice held little emotion, his eyes held authority and if she didn’t want to respect him while on his land, than he could end her now, he had no problem with that at all. His muscles rippled through his skin, moving as his body moved, showing how tone he was and how strong he was.
The cloud above had finally covered all the blue sky above and it made it cooler and darker. ”Or, do you wish to not give me your name? If so, then you should know quickly who I am… I am Felix Hell, King of the Demonic Alliance and I do not take any bullshit from those whom come on my land… You are on my herd land, you need to learn some respect and answering with the simple word of ’Me’ show me you know nothing of respect and I can easily teach it to you.”
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Post by ashes on Jan 14, 2013 16:24:14 GMT -10
Burnt Ashes
She snorted and looked at the stallion, or Felix Hell as he called himself. Before she laughed, she barely stopped herself when he announced his title. She didn't change her facial expression. It was still a blank canvas, except for the faint trace of an amused smile across it. Should I bow to him, ha! Of course not! Ok so then I will just choose my words careful. He doesn't scare me but I don't underestimate his power.
I look at him square in the eye as he steps closer to me, trying to look intimidating. Once again I have to stop myself from laughing, but this time I am unsuccessful from stopping it and it echoes across through the air. The only sound audible, not even the birds are chirping now. She finally noticed the darling sky and wondered how she didn't notice it before.
Burnt Ashes, King Felix. I say with a touch of sarcasm in my voice. I wait for his reaction, I might have just started I fight but I don't care. I'm not in the mood to deal with anybody. Word Count: 195 Muse: Not bad Notes: I think it's hilarious xD
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Post by Renea on Jan 14, 2013 16:51:17 GMT -10
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The black brute held his head high, his brown eyes were on her every move, even the one where it seemed her mouth would split with a chuckle or maybe some form of laughter. He stare down at her from where he stood, his feet planted firmly on her paved road that was right in front of the hospital where he had appeared from. His alliance would be something that no one would want to mess with and he would make sure all, including this wretch understood that.
As he walked forward, it was not his mission to intimidate, but to merely get an idea about this mare. She seemed like someone who would be a hard one to get and he would make sure she understood who was in charge in this herd and this alliance. ”Burnt Ashes, King Felix.” Her were held a hint of sarcasm and his ears flicked back for a moment as he looked at her. ”Watch your tongue you meaningless quim because I tear from that pretty little mouth… If you’re going to be in my land and my alliance, you better show me your respect because if you don’t, you will find just how stupid you were.” He said to her before turning from her, moving back towards the hospital.
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Post by ashes on Jan 15, 2013 17:03:13 GMT -10
Burnt Ashes
I smiled on the inside, noting how I bothered the stallion. Normally I wouldn't have fought with the stallion this long and now I realize why I never kept fighting long. It got boring very quickly. Lets spice things up, why don't we. My smile grew from amused to evil and mischievous, on the inside of course. On the outside my face went from emotionless to a touch apologetic and sad. But still emotionless.
Taking a step towards the stallion, Felix, as he spoke I tried not to snarl at him. I am to never be treated like this. And if we become friends, I will make that known. He spoke in a low tone, full of authority. Asserting dominance, ok. Well might as well pledge my allegiance to him, but no not just yet. He turns around walks back towards where he had first appeared. Wait! I call out to him. Im sorry. My name is Burnt Ashes but I prefer Ashes. I say and bow to him, hoping he accepts my apology. I wouldn't mind having him as my leader, he's not that bad looking I must say.
Word Count: 198 Muse: Great Notes: The next one will be longer i hope.. Sorry
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Post by Renea on Jan 15, 2013 17:47:09 GMT -10
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The black breast didn’t need the mare around to bother him, he was tired of the pathetic games they tried to play and he had little time for them. He had his own plans, had his own missions and their games did not play into them at all. He moved with a strong step, his body did not move fast nor did it move slowly, but at an even pace that showed his power, that showed his confidence and his head was held high and he looked like someone that other would leave alone.
His front hoof landed on the steps that lead into the old hospital, making a sound of tapping that was strange compared to the stone of rugged lands. He was use to them however, a voice stopped him. ”Wait!” He stopped and snorted, turning to look at the mare for a moment, wondering what she wanted. ”I’m sorry. My name is Burnt Ashes but I prefer Ashes.” He snorted and turned, his feet were now on the steps, his body higher than her own even more. ”I have no time for pathetic games, Burnt Ashes… These are my lands, this is my Alliance and games are not in my plans for them… If you plan on staying in this land, than go and find a house to call your own for you and your family… If you don’t plan on staying, then get out and find another land to bother and annoy.” He said, waiting to see what she was going to say or do.
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Post by ashes on Jan 16, 2013 11:45:07 GMT -10
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His words were like a dagger to my heart. Family. I have no family. This time I didn't mask my emotions, I let them appear on my face as clear as day. My eyes were full of pain, regret, and betrayal. I couldn't bring myself to look at him. I was afraid if I did I might cry, and I hate crying. I...I.. have no family. I whispered, to afraid and shy to raise my voice any higher.
I curled my head up to my neck, and let the flash backs come. Ashes, Alfredo wants to see you immediatly. My father told me. I gave him a questioning look but obeyed. I went in search of Alfredo, our herd leader. When I found him he was in a secluded little meadow with only one entrance. The rest where blocked off by mountain sides. Worridely I took a step back but he quickly cornered me. I begged him not to do it, but it didn't work. He raped me, brutally. He kept saying he loved me, but if so then why would he rape me? That night I ran from him and here I am now. Word Count: 205 Muse: Amazing Notes: I think its really good
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Post by Renea on Jan 16, 2013 13:58:10 GMT -10
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His words seemed to affect her in more ways than one and he honestly didn’t care much on that end. Felix was not someone who cared about others feelings, he got what he wanted and he made his point. Feelings were useless to those of the dark nature, only a few dark horses actually acknowledged their feelings. Those who did have feelings knew how to manage them, but Felix just had logic and sometimes a bit of anger. ”I...I.. have no family.” He looked at her as she whispered. ”Good, then I don’t have to put up with more… Go and find yourself an old house.” He said, flicking his tail as he looked around for a moment and moved off the steps and around the side of the hospital, glancing at something for a moment and then stood in the middle of the street.
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Post by ashes on Jan 16, 2013 16:12:39 GMT -10
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I stopped crying as the flashbacks stopped. My demeanor went from emotionally to confident. I want to ask you something. I stated, no I didn't ask I said it. I looked at him as he turned around, my eyes empty of the sadness and pain they had once held. May I join your alliance, King Felix Hell. I say with just the right amount of confidence and respect. I gracefully lower myself into a bow. This required a lot of trust on my part, as he could easily snap my neck and kill me in an instant.
The birds began chirping again and the clouds became lighter, not a lot but just by a hair. If he didn't kill me I think that is something I might want to inquire about later. I waited for his response all the while remaining in my bowing position.
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Post by Renea on Jan 17, 2013 10:44:57 GMT -10
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The eyes of the black beast moved across each sections of the land he could see from in front of his hospital. He was ready to have a full heard, to have one that would be great and strong. ”I want to ask you something.” The black stallion turned his head towards her and then his body. What was it that the mare wanted now, he had no time for games and he was ready to focus on other things other than her. ”May I join your alliance, King Felix Hell.” He snorted slightly, looking over at her for a moment and lifted his head. ”If you are here, I would expect you to already be considered a Demonic in her own soul… Now, I have a question for you… We have ranks in this land… Right now you are nothing more than a Common Mare, nothing special… But you can earn the right of higher rankers… Scout, Assassin, Main Body, or Royal Guard, those are the ranks I am offering… “ He said to the mare as he flicked his black tail.
He looked at her, knowing her training would have to start now if she wanted to be any of those ranks, it would take time. He waited to hear her answer.
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Post by ashes on Jan 18, 2013 11:54:17 GMT -10
[/i]Burnt Ashes I flicked my tail and looked at Felix. My earlier emotions gone. I would never break down in front of him again, I promised myself. It was too embarrassing. He spoke of the ranks in his herd, and the ranks were very tempting, very, very, tempting. I nodded, Royal Guard. I noted that he probably wouldn't accept it, but I had to try. It was better for me to protect him, than be in a position to be hurt by him. And this way he could also help protect me, at least a little bit. I pranced on my hooves, taking in the building in front of me. It looked like some kind of big building of importance from when the humans were here. Humans, evil humans. Only care about themselves, evil beings. Even eviler than me. I turned my attention back to Felix, once again awaiting his answer. Word Count: 153 Muse: Ehhh Notes: Thanks [/i][/center]
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Post by Renea on Jan 18, 2013 12:18:49 GMT -10
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As the large black stallion looked downward at the mare whom seemed to express no emotion from earlier and was not thinking over what he had just said. He knew this ranks were not easy ones to fill and he was not just going to allow anyone to be in these ranks. They would all need training and he would be the one to start that training until he found someone else who was worthy enough to train them. ”Royal Guard.” He walked towards her slowly as she spoke the rank she wanted, the rank she wanted to work on becoming. ”Aiming high on your first day…” He said, a hint of a smile on his lips as he tossed his head and turned from her, walking down the road and looking back at her.
”Follow me, Ash.”
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[/color] He said, already shortening her name to what he wanted to call her and he doubted that she would say anything, though if she did, he would not have a problem obliging to her on a request for what she was call. ”Behind this old building is a large area with flat stone… It is where we will do our training… Royal Guards are trained by me… One day, you will protect my family and that means following my instructions as well as those of my future mate and my children once they are all enough, which is when I will come to you and say that you need to follow them… They will be the hires to this alliance, so their words is just as good as our own, though you will ultimately listen to me… One day, I will put you in charge of just one of my family members… It could be my mate or my offspring, but you will focus on one… Until that time, you are in training…”[/color] He said as he walked around the old hospital and stopped at the wooden fence that separated the lands from the paved area. ”Until I say you are ready, you will train with me and any other who wants that rank.”[/color] He said, looking at her as he walked to one of the two openings and went in. He looked at her and snorted. ”Until you have become that rank, you will also be given special task to prepare you for guarding the royal family… Such as patrolling the lands… Until you are the actually rank, you will take the nightly patrol around the land. You will walk it every night until you hear the sound of three chimes in a row from the tower on the building.”[/color] He motioned towards a large thing on top of the building, an old clock tower that actually worked. [/justify] WC. 446 TAG. burnt ashes by ashes COM. ^_^ SONG. warrior by disturbed [/color][/font][/size] [/blockquote][/td][/tr][tr][td] [/td][/tr][/table][/center]
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Post by ashes on Jan 21, 2013 5:46:10 GMT -10
Burnt Ashes
My ego was hurt, but I quickly pushed it aside. I nodded at Felix, I understand. When does training begin? I asked. I only chose Royal Guard because I needed someone to be around. Yes, I liked being on my own but being solo eventually took its toll on you. I was ready to live in a herd again. But if Felix tried the same thing the other stallion tried, then I don't know. Maybe I would be ok with it. I don't know.
I took another step towards Felix, ready to hear what my assignment was. I let my orbs stray a bit, and the instantly landed on the big building. I wondered what his strange attachment to it was. Maybe I would find that out later. Who knows.
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