My unlucky life(ashes)

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Amerilo Rose was walking by the forest edge smiling to herself. She was glad she got away from her old herd. They had abused her and teased her. Her sister gotten the herd when their parents died. Her sister tried to kill her and her mate had raped her. Now she is scared and pregnant. She never wanted any of this.

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[bg=333a0a][atrb=border,0,true][atrb=width,500,true] Tuxedo I lifted my head, as my I gracefully glided over the land. My hooves acting like a ballerinas, floating on air. My orbs scanned the area, taking in the beautiful scenery. The smell of a mare entered my nose. I slowed my pace, and tried to follow it. I barely made a sound as I made my way towards the mare. I followed the scent and as the scent became stronger I knew I was getting closer. As the mare came into view, I noticed her head hanging low and her body language told me that she looked defeated. I wonder what happened to her. Hi Miss. How are you? Are you lost? I say my words came out musical and sweet. I never intended to hurt this mare, and I hope she knew that. My eyes looked at her, but not in an intimidating way. I came to a halt in front of the mare politely waiting for her answer. Word Count: 161 Muse: Ehh Notes: Can you write a little more next time please?

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Amerilo Rose saw the stallion walk up to her. She said" I'm Amerilo Rose but you can call me Rose for short. Yes I'm lost and scared that my sister and her mate would find and kill me. What's your name?" She wanted a mate and some friends.Someone to love her for who she is. She was raped and now pregnant. She was scared no one would love a scared pathetic mare.

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[bg=333a0a][atrb=border,0,true][atrb=width,500,true] Tuxedo He just stared at the mare, when she spoke. Her voice, it was undescribable. But it gave him this feeling of being complete. Without even realizing he fell in love with this mare, Rose. My face went into a look of surprise when she said that her sister and her sisters mate wanted to kill her. If you don't mind me asking Miss Rose, but why are they after you? I said politely. I was instantly curious about this. I took a step closer to her, trying to comfort her. But I don't know if it worked or not. Word Count: 100 Muse: Terrible Notes: Wow its so short i'm so sorry..

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Rose said" They were after the land and herd that our parents owned. They killed my parents to because the land would have been mine. They always teased and tried to kill me till I ran away." She felt safe with this stallion and hoped she could trust him. She wants friends and a mate to keep her safe. She never wanted this to happen to her. She was scared of almost everything. She would like some peace and a place to stay. She would love someone to love her for who she is a shy, timid, pathetic mare. She wants her unborn foal safe too.

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[bg=333a0a][atrb=border,0,true][atrb=width,500,true] ]Tuxedo I was shocked. Who in their right mind would do that? To there own sibling of all people! I moved closer to Rose, my orbs full of shock and sadness. I am so sorry. I said and I truly meant it. If you want to, you can stay with me. I wouldn't mind the extra company. It was a great idea and I just hoped she agreed to it. She was a very pretty mare, and I hoped that I would get the chance to know her better. Word Count: 90 Muse: Terrible.. Notes: Sorry it's short I just got a puppy so its all I could manage.

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Rose smiled and said"I'm ok now. I would be happy to stay with you. You are so sweet to ask." She was excited to have met such a nice horse. She hadn't had any friends or a mate before. She wants a mate and father for her unborn foal someone to love them for whoe they were. At least her sister wasn't here to hurt her.